I am a Year 7 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 5 and my teacher is Mr Minton.
Hi Bella,I really love the first metaphor it feels like orange paint splat around my neck, but maybe next time you can add one more metaphor near the end that will blow peoples minds out, that would be awesome. And I love your orange scarf.
Hi Bella,
ReplyDeleteI really love the first metaphor it feels like orange paint splat around my neck, but maybe next time you can add one more metaphor near the end that will blow peoples minds out, that would be awesome. And I love your orange scarf.